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I despise you.
Loath you.
I even want to kill you.
I belived you tricked me,
used me up and left me at my greatest moment.
You only wanted to escape.
You never wanted to be my friend.
But in the end,
when we were being sucked into space,
when I was screaming at you,
demanding not to let me go.
You only stared. Silent.
Only now do I see the look in your eyes.
They were full of hurt and sadness.
You never meant harm.
Pride and confusion got the best of me.
You were my friend. And I was yours too.
Found that you were all I had.
Then I realized that you never left me
I left you,
became a monster inside.
And I regret that.
Because once we were both there for each other,
then I seperated myself from you by hatred,
then by walls,
then by space itself.
And there's just no way of getting back to you.
Now all I want to let you know is . . .



. . . I'm sorry, love.
You know what? I don't even know. It's 3:00 AM and I can't sleep because my sleeping patten is all messed up. I go to bed at like 4 or 5 in the morning now XD

So this is something I just came up with right now. Wheatley's little poem to Chell after everything that happened in the game.

I truely don't know why I had to but I did. <3
It's not a romance poem it's a friendship poem.

:iconsm-fan21: did a little picture to go along with this poem and I was just like "B'AAAW~:heart:" [link]

Chell forgives you Wheatley. She for gives you! ;_;
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:iconihategeorgethetree:
ihategeorgethetree Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*bangs head on table*
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:iconluna-leaf:
Luna-leaf Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014
I never thought wheatley planned to betray you in the game. It didn't seem he was that kiind of character . when he was put into GLaDOS's mainframe somthing in the mainframe messed him up and made him constantly want to test. Really awsome poem btw :) I forgive you wheatley
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Coolkid8282 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Student General Artist
I always loved Wheatley! He didn't do anything wrong.


Screw you GLaDOS. You doomed yourself and blamed Wheatley and Chell.
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stopnagginme Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You say what we're all thinking!
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:iconrobogore:
robogore Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
ALRIGHT IM GUNNA GO BUY A ROCKET. GO IN SPACE. AND WHEATLEY. AND SPACEY. WHO WANTS TO COME :3
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:iconcoolkid8282:
Coolkid8282 Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Student General Artist
I AM COMING WITH YOU.
I WILL GIVE YOU MONEY!
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:iconrobogore:
robogore Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
OKAY
GRABS
GETS ROCKET
ANYONE ELSE
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:iconrobogore:
robogore Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
*AND GET
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SparX-Wolf Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2013
I forgive you Wheatley *portals to space and hugs him so hard* :')
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:iconstriatontriofan7:
StriatonTrioFan7 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013
T^T FEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELLLLLLLLLLLSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!
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SweetDreamer23 Featured By Owner May 5, 2013
Awww! X3 *squee*
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:iconhawkfirecatt:
Hawkfirecatt Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2013
I really like, but I really hate the ending of Portal 2. Mostly because Wheatley is left to float around in space. :(
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:iconrobogore:
robogore Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
:iconwheatleyplz: :iconsaysplz: Yeah ;-; 
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:iconireedstuff:
IREEDSTUFF Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Whatth- This doesn't even RHYOOOH Yup, my feels are now missing. Now you've gone and done it. There go my feels. Yup. Um, listen, I'm just- I'm just gonna go look for them now. Erm, Bye.

:iconcryforeverplz:
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lilith-onis Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2012  Student General Artist
this is __ I can't even find the words
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:iconstrawberryenigma:
strawberryenigma Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2012
Oh my gosh. S...so sweet.... :iconcryforeverplz:
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:iconkit-nightwalker:
kit-nightwalker Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2012  Student Digital Artist
SO beautiful. ; v ; OMG.
It was so beautiful my eyes watered, and now I'm sitting here feeling silly.

But really, well written and lovely poem! <3
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brendeso Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2012
I agree with Weirdcore25
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:iconweirdcore25:
Weirdcore25 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
This is very sad and true Wheatly was just confused, I think. I love Wheatly<3
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:iconaniphine:
Aniphine Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012  Professional Writer
I love how you did this. Wow. :D
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:iconpixel-program:
Pixel-Program Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012  Student General Artist
-eyes water- s-s-so s-s-s-s-sAAAAADDDDDD!!!!!!!! TT~TT WHEATLEY I FORGIVE YOUUUUUUUUUU
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:iconheadmoon:
Headmoon Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2012
so sad... I love it !
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:iconkasuki101:
Kasuki101 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
t-this was so b-beautiful...

i must no cry i must not cry i must not cry i must n-

UWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!! T^T THIS WAS AMAZING!~
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WheatleyFan42 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Can't... *sob* Stop... *sob* Crying... BWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH WHEATLEY I FORGIVE YOU!!!!
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:iconc8ecat:
C8ecat Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012
*sniff* What? Oh, those things in my eyes? Tears. They are called tears.
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:iconrosie-throne-ofdeath:
rosie-throne-ofdeath Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2012
awwwww! :'''''(
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alannatheseedrian Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2012
*sniff sniff* that justs gets you right here.
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:iconxvanilla-twilightx:
XVanilla-TwilightX Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
awwwwww this made me said ;_;
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:icondappleshadow:
Dappleshadow Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
... *Cries and hugs everyone in the world* :iconloveplz:
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:iconthebattycrow:
TheBattyCrow Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
reat, now I will cry the rest of the day :criw:
Wheatley, we luv you!!!
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Lucario0431 Featured By Owner Sep 22, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
This is amazing
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:iconkateboat:
Kateboat Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So pretty... I love it.
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Funkydalek Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2011  Student
Ahaw wow T.T
I wanna do a reaction too... but don't hold me to it... but I wanna
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WaffleMcMuffin Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
why TT.TT i love wheatley this made me cry really...
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sallystitchgirl97 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
/criesforever
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Jessica23235 Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2011
This made my eyes teary )X
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Sm-fan21 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2011
I did a base along with it:[link]
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Bluefire-Amaterasu Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2011  Student Digital Artist
;_; This is so beautiful, but now I have to cuddle my companion cube and cry a bit. So sad. :C
Wheatley is the best! Good job.
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Recipe-4-Disater Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2011  Student General Artist
Oh my gawd... This is absolutely beautiful. Great job :D
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Kateboat Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*sniff* so cute :(
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captinlight Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2011
BAW. i'm gonna get all puffy eyed in three... two... one...
well done and i love the last line, like all the other commenters said haha
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Sirens-Voice Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Dont call me a moron, Im super astute! There is no conundrum that my core cannot compute!
Lol Im sorry. This reminded me of Wheatley's Song. :heart:
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DeviantDolphinART Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Damn. Now I can't stop listening to that song! XD

It has a catchy little toon, doesn't it?
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Sirens-Voice Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD Bwahahahaha! Another one hooked on the awesome!

Him singing ish adorable X3 :heart:
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:iconhaven1324:
haven1324 Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
awe thats so sweet!
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:iconhidden-member-ruise:
Hidden-Member-Ruise Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2011
Why must GLaDOS's body make everycore evil? :(
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:icondeviantdolphinart:
DeviantDolphinART Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2011  Student Digital Artist
I don't know D:
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Music-Muffin Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:'( this is...ahmayzang. Brilliant job. *sobs* And OMFG I LOVE YOUR AVATAR. Sorry, I just love Daft Punk. ANYWAY, Great poem!
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DeviantDolphinART Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2011  Student Digital Artist
Thank you~!<3

LOL, I love Daft Punk too : D
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:iconmusic-muffin:
Music-Muffin Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No problem, lol.

I could tell! XD
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